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Friday 31 July 2015

My Poem


Pride
Pride is the colour of the rainbow, it brings out happiness when the clouds pass away and the sun crawls in,  that is when the rainbow shows it self.


Red brings out the the life
Orange brings out the healing
Yellow brings out the sunlight
Green brings out the nature
Blue brings out the serenity
Purple brings out the spirit


Pride taste like you can do anything and no one can stop you
It smell like freedom when you get a certificate
It sound like when you do something that you are proud off you can hear the wind clubbing for you
It feel’s like standing tall

Journey through the stars


The layout of the words make this poem more interesting.
it does
yes it makes it more interesting

  1. pulsing=throb rhythmically pulsate
  2. gazing= it is another word for watching
  3. infinite=is a number that doesn't stop
  4. depth=is a night sky
  5. polished= steering= it is something that is spinning  
        

  1. We look up at the sky, but the poem says: ‘gazing down into the infinite depths of the night sky’ what do you think it means by that?  

  1. Where is the author when they wrote this poem?

  1. The last stanza says: ‘Life is a space journey - anyone steering?’ What is this a metaphor for?

  1. This poem uses rhyme at the end of each stanza, what other language


  1. Using the same language features (rhyme, layout, metaphors, and the others you’ve identified) write your own poem about time, from looking out a window…

Wednesday 29 July 2015

Why sport important


Why is sport important ?

Last week we had good game of soccer . But this week we had an awesome game of soccer.Our school the year 5 came 3rd place. Playing sport is really important because it keeps you fit and healthy. Your brain get’s the energy that it need the most for learning and your muscle will gow’s to become stronger when you play sport. If you play sport you might be lucky to travel around the word to different country.

Friday 24 July 2015

Poo the elephant

Poo the elephant

One morning in the mysterious jungle a new elephant was rise. His name was poo. Poo feet hungry so he walked around the jungle looking for peanuts but there was no peanuts anywhere so poo set down on the juicy green grass and looked up in the sky and there it was the bananas but the problem is  it just too high for elephant the poo to rich. so poo the elephant went home to make a invention. When he was finish he named it elephant on a balloontumblr_m8pv1zJxVo1r9xgrio1_500_large.jpghot_air_balloon_and_elephant_by_jsousa10-d57ly4n.png. Poo came out with his invention and tried it. It went well but when poo was have way most off the balloon  were popped. Poo tried flapping his ear to help the rist of the balloon fly higher to get the bananas. After a minutes oh 2 the rust off the balloon popped and poo kept on flapping his ear but it didn’t work . poo came down with a crash” bang-clipart-cutcaster-photo-100396892-Comic-Book-Illustration.jpgSO poo gave up and buch the banana tree. Poo cried because his hand hurt but there were good news for poo some bananas fall from the banana tree and land on poo hand. Poo felt very very koa.
The End.

Pet Pen


A comma is like a full stop
yes
It is just like a full stop but it is not on the line and it does not make the words stop.


This poem has correct punctuation.
yes


VOCABULARY - describe in your own words what these words mean:
droop - Means that you are tired and sad.
squiggly -It means things that you what to wriggled


chaos -Means that it is not controllable.
palm- On your hand.
sense- means that you understand




I'm a pet pen click click on a book writing the waves I'm playing some video games pop I got you with a camera  bANG  and when I write i blow people away.








Thursday 23 July 2015

Holidays

Write a poem about your holidays.
  1. What colour might represent the holidays?
  2. What does it taste like?
  3. smell like?
  4. Look like
  5. Sound like and
  6. Feel like?
Use adjectives (describing words) and metaphors and similes for each line.
Example:


3. Write a poem using the same formula as above. One line for each sense.


Holidays
Holidays is whites it bring out the drove love freedom.
Holidays taste like hot delicious yummy chicken curry.
Holidays smell like the rain drops of tears.
Holidays sound like the beautiful waves attacking each other.
Holidays feels like the my cosy pyjamas that warm.

Holidays.

Friday 3 July 2015

My Winter Poem

Winter is cold trees has no clothes not much leaves not much grass covered in snow. Snowman are cold when it alone. Leaves on trees red and green. Wind blowing past the chill frost snow dropping from the white sky.

Thursday 2 July 2015

Glenbrae school

Students of Glenbrae school had science week on week 10 of term 2, 2015. All the senior students were involved in the making of science projects. This was part of the science curriculum and the science experiments were on the physical and chemical changes of matter. Each class went to a different classroom to know what was their science project.

On Monday we had Mrs Raj. When we were with Mrs Raj we learned physical changes of matter. The three states of matter are the three distinct physical forms that matter can take in most environments: solid, liquid, and gas. In extreme environments, other states may be present, such as plasma, Bose-Einstein condensates, and neutron stars.

The next day Mrs Parker was with us in room 7. We learned about baking bread with Mrs Parker. When put all the ingredients together we then life one rest full time and the other one went straight to the oven. After 10 minutes we took the bread out and put the full rest bread in the oven. We then made butter to go with the milk. The first one good but the other one that got full rest. The second one was that had full rest was so yum.

I am so happy because I learned lots of good things.

Inquiry at Glenbrae hall

Today Glenbrae school had our inquiry road show. This was when all the classes share what they have learned during the term. We share our learning by creating presentations posters, diagrams and hands-on actives. All of the classes had a really awesome presentations.

I enjoyed learning lots of new thing from other classes.

I learnt about in the olden day they came up with a new idea. The new idea was  flags. They use flags for signal because the other signal that they used to use was known by the enemy new what it mean. So they came up with another idea it was call flags.

The best presentations was room 7 no offence to other class. It was the best because I am in it.

Here are some photo's from the day. You can also see my presentation below.